Lei'gen Zylralei
Does not play well with others
I've been putting together a character for myself today, just looking for some feedback to see if what I've wrote isn't absolute drivel and if I've understood the starting character skills and inventory correctly.
whoosh
It's not 100% finished, I'll be fleshing out some bits and trimming others as things pop into my head, but the tl:dr is that he's a minor noble from a noble house that a bit of a laughing stock, and had a less-than-nurturing upbringing, and after sticking a giant middle finger up to own family and high society in general on the eve of his arranged marriage has basically been on the run. However rather than developing past his traumas he uses them as an excuse to be an awful person, and his mouth tends to write cheques that his knuckles can't cash.
My motivations for the character isn't just and excuse to be an asshole to all and sundry IC, I kind of want to explore being a confrontational jerk (which is quite the opposite of my OOC self), but I want his story to kind of be a redemption arc? where he learns (often the hard way) to become less nihilistic and finds ways to 'learn to play with others' (so-to-speak), and generally become less of an an asshole as time goes by.
So yeah, any feedback on Lei'gen would be much appreciated, I know it's not perfect (heck it's not even finished) but I'm trying to interpret what I've read of the lore thus far and craft what I hope is a decent character out of it.
Thanks
whoosh
It's not 100% finished, I'll be fleshing out some bits and trimming others as things pop into my head, but the tl:dr is that he's a minor noble from a noble house that a bit of a laughing stock, and had a less-than-nurturing upbringing, and after sticking a giant middle finger up to own family and high society in general on the eve of his arranged marriage has basically been on the run. However rather than developing past his traumas he uses them as an excuse to be an awful person, and his mouth tends to write cheques that his knuckles can't cash.
My motivations for the character isn't just and excuse to be an asshole to all and sundry IC, I kind of want to explore being a confrontational jerk (which is quite the opposite of my OOC self), but I want his story to kind of be a redemption arc? where he learns (often the hard way) to become less nihilistic and finds ways to 'learn to play with others' (so-to-speak), and generally become less of an an asshole as time goes by.
So yeah, any feedback on Lei'gen would be much appreciated, I know it's not perfect (heck it's not even finished) but I'm trying to interpret what I've read of the lore thus far and craft what I hope is a decent character out of it.
Thanks